Welcome to the Rime Bird :-)
Spoiled Guitar & Hoarse Voice Inc.
Without you, the world will still survive
(So what if not alive)
You’re a dream I denied
But baby I am sleeping tonight!
Mornings are as dark as my sight
You’re the will I defied
But here I rest my fight!
Staring at my body from the heights
Your skies I won’t breach
My own hell out of reach
It’s the time to close my eyes!
Here I fall, there I rise!
Written bY: Bharatshree
4 Comments »»:
You wrote it well, video is good in terms of quality and creativity... But theres scope for improvement w.r.t. the music.
Thank you for your honest feedback but to be candid with you voice is crap and messed the guitar at few places. Theres always a scope for improvement but paucity of time! May be someday I'll record it again and post MP3 this time!
Yup! You are very talented, this is lower than your average! Am glad you were able to take my comment in the right spirit as no offense was intended!
brother u need a bigger amp n sound vox to catcha wonderful tune.. song is cool but not ur recording device . also get a mic
Everyone should be known by her right name ;-)