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SHER O SHAYARI (HINDI/URDU)****In absolute crude form*****These are some of my Hindi lines that I wrote in Reply to my friends poems on some Orkut community! Though we lost that thread via my self destructive phase but here are few of them, thanks to back up, though not the complete archieve!
"Mere aansuoon ki parwha na kar inhone har judai nibhai hai,
inhi aankhon se taaron ko simeta hai aur amber pe teri tasveer sajayi hai"
Original creation!
inhi aankhon se taaron ko simeta hai aur amber pe teri tasveer sajayi hai"
Original creation!
& 1 more by BREt:
Dubne pe apne auron se nah karo gila jo tum khud apne ko hi nah bacha sake,
Duniya ek tamasha hai jee le isey, wohBRE † hi kya jo apne gum bhi na saja sake!
Dubne pe apne auron se nah karo gila jo tum khud apne ko hi nah bacha sake,
Duniya ek tamasha hai jee le isey, woh
anyways i love to reply to people's shayari so AANYA eat dis:
dil jo chahe woh aankhein bayaan kar deti hain,
nazaron ko humnawa, dhula sa aasman kar deti hain,
chupaye baithe hain apne seene main hum goom lafzon ke paigaam,
par teri khamoshiyan humein is kadar be-zubaan kar deti hai!
Original Creation by BREt!
dil jo chahe woh aankhein bayaan kar deti hain,
nazaron ko humnawa, dhula sa aasman kar deti hain,
chupaye baithe hain apne seene main hum goom lafzon ke paigaam,
par teri khamoshiyan humein is kadar be-zubaan kar deti hai!
Original Creation by BREt!
thnx Aanya for being so generous but da fact is: u all r rockin dis forum, anyways 100Rab bro well played in jungle of shers but i m still not loosin my addiction to reply to shers!
So dis is reply to ur last sher @ 100rab:
Jis se hua hai pyaar woh bhi kabhi gair raha hoga,
chand lafzon se hi barkarar chahton ka daur raha hoga,
jo piche chor aaya hai tu yaadein wohi tujhe sambhalengi,
beetein lamhon ke aagosh main bikhri zindagi sanwarengi,
khudhai toh haasil karli tune jasbaaton ko zaya kar,
ab kehta hai ki insaaniyat ka taur* kuch aur raha hoga!?!
*(taur here means da manners as we say taur tareeke n stuff)
Original creation by BREt!
So dis is reply to ur last sher @ 100rab:
Jis se hua hai pyaar woh bhi kabhi gair raha hoga,
chand lafzon se hi barkarar chahton ka daur raha hoga,
jo piche chor aaya hai tu yaadein wohi tujhe sambhalengi,
beetein lamhon ke aagosh main bikhri zindagi sanwarengi,
khudhai toh haasil karli tune jasbaaton ko zaya kar,
ab kehta hai ki insaaniyat ka taur* kuch aur raha hoga!?!
*(taur here means da manners as we say taur tareeke n stuff)
Original creation by BREt!
bhai tune sham par banaya toh hum jara subha par bana de!
Patton par padi os si zindagi,
Har mod par khadi bahein failaye khushi,
Mere gharondhe main padi jo suraj ki paheli kiran,
Aur mujhko bhed gayi phoolon ki khushbhoo ki chuban!
Aisa armaano ka mela saja hai aaj is pehar main,
Har shaks muskura raha hai aaj is shehar main,
Kabhi Kisi chidiya ko mere lafzon ki aarzoo hogi,
Jee le thandi chaanv me phir loo hogi dopahar main!
(last two lines suggest dat today "da present" & wat is our own is best but, we waste our time in wat others hav & thinkin abt da future! Da rest of da poem is simply definin da mornings)
Original Creation bY: BREt
Patton par padi os si zindagi,
Har mod par khadi bahein failaye khushi,
Mere gharondhe main padi jo suraj ki paheli kiran,
Aur mujhko bhed gayi phoolon ki khushbhoo ki chuban!
Aisa armaano ka mela saja hai aaj is pehar main,
Har shaks muskura raha hai aaj is shehar main,
Kabhi Kisi chidiya ko mere lafzon ki aarzoo hogi,
Jee le thandi chaanv me phir loo hogi dopahar main!
(last two lines suggest dat today "da present" & wat is our own is best but, we waste our time in wat others hav & thinkin abt da future! Da rest of da poem is simply definin da mornings)
Original Creation bY: BREt
yup bhai! Glad to c u back & welcomin u back wid dis small piece of work:
Chala jaa tu kaheen bhi, tujhe waapas aana hai yaheen,
jab tu naheen tha tab teri yaadon ka dilasa tha,
jab tu naheen tha soona sa tha aasman, bikhri si thi zameen,
Tere aane par ab aur nah koi rahi kami,
jo thama sa tha sama woh phir chulbulane laga,
Ki teri saanson main meri dhadkan phir hai rami!
Original Creation by: BREt (especially written for my bachpan ka sabse dusht sahela ANKUR "ANGOOR" SHARMA!
Chala jaa tu kaheen bhi, tujhe waapas aana hai yaheen,
jab tu naheen tha tab teri yaadon ka dilasa tha,
jab tu naheen tha soona sa tha aasman, bikhri si thi zameen,
Tere aane par ab aur nah koi rahi kami,
jo thama sa tha sama woh phir chulbulane laga,
Ki teri saanson main meri dhadkan phir hai rami!
Original Creation by: BREt (especially written for my bachpan ka sabse dusht sahela ANKUR "ANGOOR" SHARMA!
yo we hav da two awesome poets on! LOKI & ANGOOR!
LOKI dis isur
Dard-e-dil bata bhi doon magar, haal-e-dil suna bhi doon magar,
Kya farak padega besabar jahan ko agar:
marr bhi jaoon aur mehroom reh jaye meri dagar?
Sab rishtey hain nazaron ka dokha ki apne hi pher lete hain nazar,
Kisi begaaney ki talash main hi kat raha hai mera safar,
Raahein phisal rahi hai haathon se ki ehsaan-na-sanaaz hai sapno ki khabar!
Original Creation bY: BREt!
*(copied shers & sources r liable for delete)
LOKI dis is
Dard-e-dil bata bhi doon magar, haal-e-dil suna bhi doon magar,
Kya farak padega besabar jahan ko agar:
marr bhi jaoon aur mehroom reh jaye meri dagar?
Sab rishtey hain nazaron ka dokha ki apne hi pher lete hain nazar,
Raahein phisal rahi hai haathon se ki ehsaan-na-sanaaz hai sapno ki khabar!
Original Creation bY: BREt!
*(copied shers & sources r liable for delete)
Hey Aanya nice try & here's ur
Sare jahan ko dard ne mara hai yahan dard baney hakeem,
Meethay ki aans hi kyun ki jab pata tha kadwa hoga neem!
Samandar main dariya samaye, sama saka hai samandar ko kaun?
Tere ashkon ki vakat hi kya hai abhi samandar hai maun!
Jhalkatey raho aansoon, bahatey raho u-heen tamam umar nikaal lo,
Duniya ke mazaaq ka mazloom bano ya phir chup rahene ki aadat daal lo!
Original creation bY: BREt (created: 9th of July 2008,1:42 pm )
Sare jahan ko dard ne mara hai yahan dard baney hakeem,
Meethay ki aans hi kyun ki jab pata tha kadwa hoga neem!
Samandar main dariya samaye, sama saka hai samandar ko kaun?
Tere ashkon ki vakat hi kya hai abhi samandar hai maun!
Jhalkatey raho aansoon, bahatey raho u-heen tamam umar nikaal lo,
Duniya ke mazaaq ka mazloom bano ya phir chup rahene ki aadat daal lo!
Original creation bY: BREt (created: 9th of July 2008,
& dis is ur second sher's reply:
Nah apno ki arzoo hai, nah begaano ki hai aas,
khwaab kab dekhe themaine
(read the last 2 lines of my last reply to Loki's sher carefully it means dat even my dreams dont bring me da news dat some stranger wil be my destiny coz i dont even lookin for the paths) Huh, somebody misunderstood it!
Original Creation bY: BREt (created on: 9th July, 2008 -1:50 PM )
Nah apno ki arzoo hai, nah begaano ki hai aas,
khwaab kab dekhe the
(read the last 2 lines of my last reply to Loki's sher carefully it means dat even my dreams dont bring me da news dat some stranger wil be my destiny coz i dont even lookin for the paths) Huh, somebody misunderstood it!
Original Creation bY: BREt (created on: 9th July, 2008 -
Zameen bhi main hoon, tera aasman bhi main,
Kabhi aag ka dariya, tujh par meharbaan bhi main,
Hoon tere saamne, hawa hoon, tujhme basa hoon main,
kabhi khanfa hoon; kabhi dua: teri zindagi ka falsafa,
Main tera khuda, tere hone ka gawa bhi hoon main!
Instant Creation on phone bY: BREt 4 corner!
Kabhi aag ka dariya, tujh par meharbaan bhi main,
Hoon tere saamne, hawa hoon, tujhme basa hoon main,
kabhi khanfa hoon; kabhi dua: teri zindagi ka falsafa,
Main tera khuda, tere hone ka gawa bhi hoon main!
Instant Creation on phone bY: BREt 4 corner!
Dil toh nadaan hai kuch nah kuch toh bolega,
tu kitne hi daba le armaan apne tere sare raaz kholega,
Badnami se mat darr tu naam ki parwah mat kar,
Tere lafzon main goonth ke BREt tere har gam ko tatolega!
Written bY: BREt
tu kitne hi daba le armaan apne tere sare raaz kholega,
Badnami se mat darr tu naam ki parwah mat kar,
Tere lafzon main goonth ke BREt tere har gam ko tatolega!
Written bY: BREt
Reply to LOKI's last sher:
Phoolon ki toh fitrat hi hai murjhana kabhi kaaton ki khwahish kar ke dekh,
Toofaan ka kya hai paimaana jab saamnay zamane ki saazish ho rahi hai paish,
Zakhm ke nishaan bhi kuraid degi duniya ki yeh hai zaalim aur tu hai nek,
kisi se wafa ki umeed nah kar toh saari nishaaniyan jahanum main phenk!
Original Creation bY: BREt
Phoolon ki toh fitrat hi hai murjhana kabhi kaaton ki khwahish kar ke dekh,
Toofaan ka kya hai paimaana jab saamnay zamane ki saazish ho rahi hai paish,
Zakhm ke nishaan bhi kuraid degi duniya ki yeh hai zaalim aur tu hai nek,
kisi se wafa ki umeed nah kar toh saari nishaaniyan jahanum main phenk!
Original Creation bY: BREt
Especially written by BREt for his Rascal friend LOKI!
Doston ki gaaliyan bhi duaoon ka kaam karti hai,
Humari dua bhi leta jaa yeh teri seerat acchi tarha bayaan karti hai,
Oh khambhakt mare jara samajh mere ishare,
Behuda, behaya, beshram, beaabroo, zaleel wakeel yeh naam sare hain tumhare,
Ab kis kis naam se hum tum ko pukare?
Har naam main tere meri fitrat udaan bharti hai!
RaScALs Roxx!
P.S.: Posted again due to spelling mistake in da last edition!
Doston ki gaaliyan bhi duaoon ka kaam karti hai,
Humari dua bhi leta jaa yeh teri seerat acchi tarha bayaan karti hai,
Oh khambhakt mare jara samajh mere ishare,
Behuda, behaya, beshram, beaabroo, zaleel wakeel yeh naam sare hain tumhare,
Ab kis kis naam se hum tum ko pukare?
Har naam main tere meri fitrat udaan bharti hai!
RaScALs Roxx!
P.S.: Posted again due to spelling mistake in da last edition!
wah wah! LOKI miya & ANGOOR bhai! Awesome shayari!
dis 1 my contribution:
kis raah par thamega mera safar?
yeh manjeelein hai mom si!
Kaun layega tere aane ki khabar?
yeh raahein bhi hai maun si!
kuch yaadein deti thi dil ko sabar!
Par yaad nahi kaun si!
Original Creation bY: BREt
dis 1 my contribution:
kis raah par thamega mera safar?
yeh manjeelein hai mom si!
Kaun layega tere aane ki khabar?
yeh raahein bhi hai maun si!
kuch yaadein deti thi dil ko sabar!
Par yaad nahi kaun si!
Original Creation bY: BREt
thankooooo bhai ANKUR! Thanx 4 always being dere! I love you!!
& dis 1 4 u Angoori begum:
Mila tere jaisa dost yeh mera naseeb hai,
Faaslon ke beech main bhi hum-tum kareeb hain,
Paaya hai tune mere jaisa laakhon main ek dost,
Phir bhi e-dost tu kehta apne aap ko gareeb hai?
Bakhuda! Tu bachpan main bhi aisa tha...
...Tu aaj bhi ajeeb hai!
Original Creation bY: BREt
Stay like dat only bro & never change! U r da strength!
& dis 1 4 u Angoori begum:
Mila tere jaisa dost yeh mera naseeb hai,
Faaslon ke beech main bhi hum-tum kareeb hain,
Paaya hai tune mere jaisa laakhon main ek dost,
Phir bhi e-dost tu kehta apne aap ko gareeb hai?
Bakhuda! Tu bachpan main bhi aisa tha...
...Tu aaj bhi ajeeb hai!
Original Creation bY: BREt
Stay like dat only bro & never change! U r da strength!
& heres a reply to AANYA:
Let da love stay in ur heart,
Let it be for da ones who hurt,
Let it be free & allow its berth,
Let da past be dead for new birth,
Let tears wash away all dat blemished,
Let it be poison for u it will be kissed,
Let it travel inside by my sips,
Let it be BREt lips!
Original Creation bY: BREt (especially for AANYA)
Let da love stay in ur heart,
Let it be for da ones who hurt,
Let it be free & allow its berth,
Let da past be dead for new birth,
Let tears wash away all dat blemished,
Let it be poison for u it will be kissed,
Let it travel inside by my sips,
Let it be BREt lips!
Original Creation bY: BREt (especially for AANYA)
kabhi waqt nahi tha, kabhi irade,
jeete the toh the khalnayak, warna saade,
Umar beeti u heen, kabhi zindagi haari, kabhi jeeti,
Kuch lamho ki thakaan thi ek baat ki pehchaan,
Poore hue sare armaan bas hum reh gaye aadhe,
Ab kis kis ne sameta mujhko aur maine kya dia unko,
Ehsaan nai jata raha hoon par log kahete hai ki maine tode hain wade,
Nibha nai saka wafa sharminda hoon,
Ghoom raha hoon sharmindagi ka bhoj laade!
Written by: Heartless Freak BREt!
jeete the toh the khalnayak, warna saade,
Umar beeti u heen, kabhi zindagi haari, kabhi jeeti,
Kuch lamho ki thakaan thi ek baat ki pehchaan,
Poore hue sare armaan bas hum reh gaye aadhe,
Ab kis kis ne sameta mujhko aur maine kya dia unko,
Ehsaan nai jata raha hoon par log kahete hai ki maine tode hain wade,
Nibha nai saka wafa sharminda hoon,
Ghoom raha hoon sharmindagi ka bhoj laade!
Written by: Heartless Freak BREt!
Kis tamanna ko pukaroon,
Dhul gayi jo yaadein sari,
Kis hasrat ko tujhpe waroon,
kya kam thi umar jo tujh pe wari?
In rangon ko bhi kaise paloon,
Ke inme rangat hai tumhari,
Har lamhey ki buri aadat hai..
Chubta hai baarish ki boondon ki tarha,
Suraj dhala hai mere kandho par,
To zindagi kaise roshan ho humari,
Pyaar tha jua humne socha hum bhi hai juari,
Ab in andheron ki panha main,
Rakam gin ne ka silsila hai jari!
Most stupid creation ever bY: BREt
Dhul gayi jo yaadein sari,
Kis hasrat ko tujhpe waroon,
kya kam thi umar jo tujh pe wari?
In rangon ko bhi kaise paloon,
Ke inme rangat hai tumhari,
Har lamhey ki buri aadat hai..
Chubta hai baarish ki boondon ki tarha,
Suraj dhala hai mere kandho par,
To zindagi kaise roshan ho humari,
Pyaar tha jua humne socha hum bhi hai juari,
Ab in andheron ki panha main,
Rakam gin ne ka silsila hai jari!
Most stupid creation ever bY: BREt
Duniyan chal rahi thi mere bina bhi,
Aur chalti rahegi mere begair,
Aansoon bhi honge aur giley bhi,
Ki Ishq ne cheda hai mujhse bair,
Mujhe nai chaiye apno ki meharbani,
Apne hi jab ho chuke ho gair,
Main sifar hoon tere safar ki kahani main,
Nahi nibha paoonga tera diya hua darja! Kher.....
.....tu jee zindagi ke zinda hoon main abhi,
Log kahete hai ki main hoon zeher!
Producing originals since 1985, bY: BREt
Aur chalti rahegi mere begair,
Aansoon bhi honge aur giley bhi,
Ki Ishq ne cheda hai mujhse bair,
Mujhe nai chaiye apno ki meharbani,
Apne hi jab ho chuke ho gair,
Main sifar hoon tere safar ki kahani main,
Nahi nibha paoonga tera diya hua darja! Kher.....
.....tu jee zindagi ke zinda hoon main abhi,
Log kahete hai ki main hoon zeher!
Producing originals since 1985, bY: BREt
Ab ya toh saza de nahi katne de umar yeh meri tanhai main,
Yaadon se ohjhal ho ja ke tujhe hi na maar daloon kaheen teri judai main!
bY: BREt
Yaadon se ohjhal ho ja ke tujhe hi na maar daloon kaheen teri judai main!
bY: BREt
Murjhe phoolon se saja sej tha,
Rango se door main shwate tha,
Sookha sa soona pada ek khet tha,
Pairon tale raundagaya
Meri raahon main jo saye the,
Meri aankhon main woh samaye the,
Meri raahon main jo kaatein the wohi mera saath nibhate the,
Mere dard ne nah jane kitne mod behlaye the!
Ab na hoon main, nah hai mera nishaan,
Phir bhi chalti rahegi duniya ki khaan,
kya payamaine
Kya khoyamaine
bY: l3ret
Rango se door main shwate tha,
Sookha sa soona pada ek khet tha,
Pairon tale raunda
Meri raahon main jo saye the,
Meri aankhon main woh samaye the,
Meri raahon main jo kaatein the wohi mera saath nibhate the,
Mere dard ne nah jane kitne mod behlaye the!
Ab na hoon main, nah hai mera nishaan,
Phir bhi chalti rahegi duniya ki khaan,
kya paya
Kya khoya
bY: l3ret
Drugs sealed into his lung,
& infant got stitched by songs dat metal sung,
blood poured as if cloud got busted,
Dey twisted da emasculation coz it was already rusted!
Darkness revised bY: BREt (left such writings long time back)
& infant got stitched by songs dat metal sung,
blood poured as if cloud got busted,
Dey twisted da emasculation coz it was already rusted!
Darkness revised bY: BREt (left such writings long time back)
zinda hoon na zameen se, nah aasmaan se,
bas juda (connected) hoon tujhse, judaa (isolated) hoon jahaan se,
duniya ki is bheed main chaahatein hain bahut,
bheed main tu kho jaye toh tujhe paoon kahan se!
first juda means connected! second judaa means isolated!
Original Creation bY: BREt (for all my best friends, u rock guys thanx 4 being dere & still tolerating the kicks! lol!)
bas juda (connected) hoon tujhse, judaa (isolated) hoon jahaan se,
duniya ki is bheed main chaahatein hain bahut,
bheed main tu kho jaye toh tujhe paoon kahan se!
first juda means connected! second judaa means isolated!
Original Creation bY: BREt (for all my best friends, u rock guys thanx 4 being dere & still tolerating the kicks! lol!)
jane kya tha maloom nai,
uske na hone ka bhi koi gam nai,
paya tha jisko khone ke liye,
laazmi hai uska kehna ke hum main dum nai,
phir agar mila toh kal poochunga,
duniya kyun kaheti hai ki ab hum, hum nai?
Written bY: BREt (creating originals in dis fake world)
uske na hone ka bhi koi gam nai,
paya tha jisko khone ke liye,
laazmi hai uska kehna ke hum main dum nai,
phir agar mila toh kal poochunga,
duniya kyun kaheti hai ki ab hum, hum nai?
Written bY: BREt (creating originals in dis fake world)
thankoo bhaiyon! thanx 4 ur
Humein ganwara nah tha khud ko khona,
isliye humne sara jahaan kho diya,
Jis shaks ne samjha humein khilona,
tamasha mera dekh aaj woh bhi ro diya!
Written bY: BREt
Humein ganwara nah tha khud ko khona,
isliye humne sara jahaan kho diya,
Jis shaks ne samjha humein khilona,
tamasha mera dekh aaj woh bhi ro diya!
Written bY: BREt
Nah raha ab kuch khone ko jo kho gaya mera sabar,
Bas chaah hai ab tujhe paane ki aur tu hai bekhabar,
Meri har adda tere ishaaron ki mohtaaz hai,
Dard bhi nai hota ab, sari duaen ho chuki hain beasar,
Mana aage nikal aaya hoon abhi, isme bhi kuch raaz hai,
Par tujh par hi khatam hoga meri zindagi ka safar!
Written bY: BREt
Bas chaah hai ab tujhe paane ki aur tu hai bekhabar,
Meri har adda tere ishaaron ki mohtaaz hai,
Dard bhi nai hota ab, sari duaen ho chuki hain beasar,
Mana aage nikal aaya hoon abhi, isme bhi kuch raaz hai,
Par tujh par hi khatam hoga meri zindagi ka safar!
Written bY: BREt
ab meri baari........
Kuch nai hai ab bas raakh hai,
Zindagi se tauba ab maut bhi khaak hai,
Hum toh kho hi chuke the apne aap ko,
Unhone bataya ki abhi bhi bazaar main humari dhaak hai!
Kuch nai hai ab bas raakh hai,
Zindagi se tauba ab maut bhi khaak hai,
Hum toh kho hi chuke the apne aap ko,
Unhone bataya ki abhi bhi bazaar main humari dhaak hai!
Log poochte hai main kahan hoon,
Shayad unke akelepan ki main dawa hoon!
Main hoon ujli ghataaon main,
Machli fizaaoon main,
Sangdil dishaaon main,
Sahemi hawaoon main,
Dilkash raahon main,
Bepanha baahon main,
Dard si aahon main,
Khushi ki chahon main,
Garz ki nighaaon main,
Matlab ki kehkaahon main,
Shamil hoon tere gunhaoon main,
Ishq ki duaaon main,
Main hoon apne aap ko khud main simete hue,
Aur woh soch rahe hain ki main dayre ka mohtaaz hoon,
Hoon suljha hua sabke saamne, koi raaz toh nahi,
Woh sochte hai mere baad bhi aur kayenaat hain!
Woh nai jaante ke ab:
Woh khud khade hain gawhaaon main,
Is baat ki gawhai dene ke liye:
Ki ab khuda hai meri panhaaon main!
Original Creation bY: BREt
Shayad unke akelepan ki main dawa hoon!
Main hoon ujli ghataaon main,
Machli fizaaoon main,
Sangdil dishaaon main,
Sahemi hawaoon main,
Dilkash raahon main,
Bepanha baahon main,
Dard si aahon main,
Khushi ki chahon main,
Garz ki nighaaon main,
Matlab ki kehkaahon main,
Shamil hoon tere gunhaoon main,
Ishq ki duaaon main,
Main hoon apne aap ko khud main simete hue,
Aur woh soch rahe hain ki main dayre ka mohtaaz hoon,
Hoon suljha hua sabke saamne, koi raaz toh nahi,
Woh sochte hai mere baad bhi aur kayenaat hain!
Woh nai jaante ke ab:
Woh khud khade hain gawhaaon main,
Is baat ki gawhai dene ke liye:
Ki ab khuda hai meri panhaaon main!
Original Creation bY: BREt
I first wrote dis in English but den da Hindi version turned out to be even better:
English version:
Dont expect just give,
Stop bothering abt life, just live!
Hindi version:
Kisi se koi umeed na rakho bas diye jaoo,
Samajh kar kya karna hai, Zindagi bas jiye jaoo!
Original Creation bY: BREt
English version:
Dont expect just give,
Stop bothering abt life, just live!
Hindi version:
Samajh kar kya karna hai, Zindagi bas jiye jaoo!
Original Creation bY: BREt
My contribution:
Chalo choddo bhi yaar ab rona!
ki yeh majaak toh umar bhar ka hai,
Apne ashkon ka sahara le lo hasne ke liye,
Kyun gumon ke sehar main betaab ho basne ke liye?
Ek pal main sara jahaan seene ke liye....
.... jaroori hai thoda dard bhi jeene ke liye!
~!~ Original Creation bY: BREt ~!~
Chalo choddo bhi yaar ab rona!
ki yeh majaak toh umar bhar ka hai,
Apne ashkon ka sahara le lo hasne ke liye,
Kyun gumon ke sehar main betaab ho basne ke liye?
Ek pal main sara jahaan seene ke liye....
.... jaroori hai thoda dard bhi jeene ke liye!
~!~ Original Creation bY: BREt ~!~
My contribution:
Jab raat ka daur tha toh diye jala liye,
Ab roshan hoon andhere main bhi,
Jo subha aayi toh sapne saja liye,
Is roshni se mujhko meri neend bachayegi,
Meri tanhaiyoon main rango ki koi kami hi nahi,
Phir kyun meri duniya main naye rang bharne woh aayegi?
Humare aashiyane ki misaal socha tha be-intihaa hai,
Kya maloom tha is baras holi humein be-rang payegi!
~!~ Originally Stupid creation bY: BREt ~!~
Jab raat ka daur tha toh diye jala liye,
Ab roshan hoon andhere main bhi,
Jo subha aayi toh sapne saja liye,
Is roshni se mujhko meri neend bachayegi,
Meri tanhaiyoon main rango ki koi kami hi nahi,
Phir kyun meri duniya main naye rang bharne woh aayegi?
Humare aashiyane ki misaal socha tha be-intihaa hai,
Kya maloom tha is baras holi humein be-rang payegi!
~!~ Originally Stupid creation bY: BREt ~!~
& my bad habbit of replying to people's shayari!
Wafadari par toh humesha shubha jaahir kiya hi hai aapke shaq ne,
Ab jahan aagaya
Shakl agar wohi hai toh andaaz-e-nazar tumhari hi badli hogi,
Aur mizaz-e-dil ki toh baat hi na karo.....
Ke dil ki awaaj sun sun kar ab kaan lage hain pakk ne!
Original bY: BREt
Wafadari par toh humesha shubha jaahir kiya hi hai aapke shaq ne,
Ab jahan aa
Shakl agar wohi hai toh andaaz-e-nazar tumhari hi badli hogi,
Aur mizaz-e-dil ki toh baat hi na karo.....
Ke dil ki awaaj sun sun kar ab kaan lage hain pakk ne!
Original bY: BREt
Kyun hai khushi is gam ke mahaul main?
Yeh jadu hai tera ya tu koi jaadu hai?
Khamoshi sun raha hoon duniya ke is raul main!
Woh shaks jo padh raha hai meri kriya lagta hai koi sadhu hai!
Bin tere kyun abaad hoon main is neele ambar ke taley!
Is kadar basa hai tera chehra meri aankhon main,
Kyun na zindagi ko ab teri kami khaley?
Kabhi aalam tha ki tu ruke toh ruke hum, tu chaley toh hum chaley!
I LOVE U BAWAJI!
Original creation bY: BREt
Yeh jadu hai tera ya tu koi jaadu hai?
Khamoshi sun raha hoon duniya ke is raul main!
Woh shaks jo padh raha hai meri kriya lagta hai koi sadhu hai!
Bin tere kyun abaad hoon main is neele ambar ke taley!
Is kadar basa hai tera chehra meri aankhon main,
Kyun na zindagi ko ab teri kami khaley?
Kabhi aalam tha ki tu ruke toh ruke hum, tu chaley toh hum chaley!
I LOVE U BAWAJI!
Original creation bY: BREt
Moral of da story: Never challenge da fearless!
Advice to RaS-cALs: Fear Less, Live More!
Advice to RaS-cALs: Fear Less, Live More!
thnx Tanvi & dis is @ Loki.... challenge accepted:
Galatfahemi thi humari nazron main ya unke nazaaron main,
Galtiyan unki harkaton main thi ya humare isharoon main,
Galat ke mayne nai jaante isliye sab sahi lagta hai,
Jo sahi hai woh galatfahemiyon ki galiyon main basta hai,
Shadi shuda bhi ginne lage hain apne aap ko kunwaron main,
Patjhad si ho gayi hai duniya ki soch in bahaaron main,
Jinki haddein hoti hain sankeern woh galatfahemiya paalte hain,
Yeh soch kar ki unki galtiyan bhi bik jayengi in khokle bazaaron main!
Koi bhi rasta bana le chahe sabse juda, saajish karengi raahein,
Paidalon ki ginti hi kya hai jab gumnaami ka andhera ho ghudsawaaron main?
Kya galat hai kya sahi yeh tu tey karne wala kaun hota hai?
Doosron ko bolne se pahele apne aap ko gher kuch sawaalon main,
Galtiyaan mahfoos hai tere daaman main......
tu khada hai galatfahemi ke peharedaaron main!
~!~ Original Creation bY: BrEt ~!~
Galatfahemi thi humari nazron main ya unke nazaaron main,
Galtiyan unki harkaton main thi ya humare isharoon main,
Galat ke mayne nai jaante isliye sab sahi lagta hai,
Jo sahi hai woh galatfahemiyon ki galiyon main basta hai,
Shadi shuda bhi ginne lage hain apne aap ko kunwaron main,
Patjhad si ho gayi hai duniya ki soch in bahaaron main,
Jinki haddein hoti hain sankeern woh galatfahemiya paalte hain,
Yeh soch kar ki unki galtiyan bhi bik jayengi in khokle bazaaron main!
Koi bhi rasta bana le chahe sabse juda, saajish karengi raahein,
Paidalon ki ginti hi kya hai jab gumnaami ka andhera ho ghudsawaaron main?
Kya galat hai kya sahi yeh tu tey karne wala kaun hota hai?
Doosron ko bolne se pahele apne aap ko gher kuch sawaalon main,
Galtiyaan mahfoos hai tere daaman main......
tu khada hai galatfahemi ke peharedaaron main!
~!~ Original Creation bY: BrEt ~!~
3 Comments »»:
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